Is it just me?
I'm not really sure what to think but that pretty much didn't make much sense.. half the time I had no idea what was going on lol :P .. Well Suggested areas of improvement would be a little bit more colour, a background maybe? and try not to make so many fast blurry movements my eyes started to hurt quickly :( ... The sound effects and song were okay.. But honestly, I'd say that the 6 I gave you all goes for effort, I'm sure that took you a lot of time and I know this is all very horrible.. but I hope this only motivates you to make better movies and not hate me :P !! good luck with your future project(s)
~Tahadation